Cameron launches challenge to end “national crisis” of poor dementia care

Many thanks for publishing my letter.
I note that the printed version differs from the original in one important point: in paragraph 3 'onto' has been edited to 'into'. 'Onto' was a deliberate statement of how care for older mentally ill people is being displaced from state provision for treatment and care towards businesses and altruistic, often untrained and voluntary community resources.
Your attention to this correction would be appreciated.