Re: The use of highly structured care to achieve blood pressure targets
It feels timely to comment on the presentation of this work thus:
Target the terms?
When RCTs are meta-analysed
And averaged data fit to outcome
The body of clinicians draw a charge
To standardise their clientele
And optimise the health care targe
That is, until their efforts hit
The buffer of impracticality
Since ideal standards cannot say
Just how they might be brought about
The task remains some way away
To spur the effort and convey
A confidence in all they spend
The struts of language are invoked
Empowering aspiration if not nous
And war game imagery provoked
To target targets brings vainglory
To own the object somehow through its name
A virtual spreadsheet cut and paste
But Faust trades happily in verbal tropes
With wishful tinkering his bait
To target targets in strict formality
With highly structured, stringent
And computerised intensity
The impact, no, effect, of tight control
Is undone, set to nothing, by reality
Far better then to focus, not take aim,
Eschew exaggeration and parse
Vigorous terms with sober reading
For clinician potency expressed in words
Will be betrayed by special pleading
Will E. Intention and outcome in guideline-based nephrological practice: a suitable space for ‘clinical technology’. Nephrol Dial Transplant 2007:22;3110-3114
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Re: The use of highly structured care to achieve blood pressure targets
It feels timely to comment on the presentation of this work thus:
Target the terms?
When RCTs are meta-analysed
And averaged data fit to outcome
The body of clinicians draw a charge
To standardise their clientele
And optimise the health care targe
That is, until their efforts hit
The buffer of impracticality
Since ideal standards cannot say
Just how they might be brought about
The task remains some way away
To spur the effort and convey
A confidence in all they spend
The struts of language are invoked
Empowering aspiration if not nous
And war game imagery provoked
To target targets brings vainglory
To own the object somehow through its name
A virtual spreadsheet cut and paste
But Faust trades happily in verbal tropes
With wishful tinkering his bait
To target targets in strict formality
With highly structured, stringent
And computerised intensity
The impact, no, effect, of tight control
Is undone, set to nothing, by reality
Far better then to focus, not take aim,
Eschew exaggeration and parse
Vigorous terms with sober reading
For clinician potency expressed in words
Will be betrayed by special pleading
Will E. Intention and outcome in guideline-based nephrological practice: a suitable space for ‘clinical technology’. Nephrol Dial Transplant 2007:22;3110-3114
Competing interests: No competing interests